Wanted: Your Input.

Me and the misses were talking the other day and we realized something. This story is strikingly similar to one that involves vampires. It has recently been adapted to film... may you know the one. Something about Bella and Jake or something. Anyways, if you know those stories, would you please help us. We CAN NOT have our great adventurous tale be compared to some whiney teenage girl that wants to be a vampire. So Feel free to give any and all suggestion via our comment box. All will be appreciated and we'll use the good ones. Actually feel free to contribute as much as you like. We like ideas. Its so much easier than coming up with them on our own.